At the Start,She Sparked a Flair That Burned My Heath.So I Started to Care,But Soon I Realised ,Isnt Fair
After what she heard she thinks I'm a Creep,About How I Feel and how i would weep
Tell Me What You Do?If the girl you love Doesn't Like You
My Minds consumed by Regret,My Heart sees love as a threat
My Heart starts to Ache,Theirs only so much i can Take...
Thats Just It So Far
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Is It Good Or Not
After what she heard she thinks I'm a Creep,About How I Feel and how i would weep
Tell Me What You Do?If the girl you love Doesn't Like You
My Minds consumed by Regret,My Heart sees love as a threat
My Heart starts to Ache,Theirs only so much i can Take...
Thats Just It So Far
Give Comments What you Think of it?.........
Is It Good Or Not
I like it, its pretty good
Piece of advice, don't try to win a woman with a poem.
Ivaylo is right. It doesn't work, and I've seen too many boys crash and burn when they tried it.
If kept in private however, the poem is good.
If kept in private however, the poem is good.
Why do you say your a creap?